tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16950751.post115837024274722083..comments2013-09-23T03:22:09.888+08:00Comments on Dawn of Twilight: Bleugh!Salubrihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14947226213955912383noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16950751.post-1158799203157028652006-09-21T08:40:00.000+08:002006-09-21T08:40:00.000+08:00oh i definitely agree with the trees being too pal...oh i definitely agree with the trees being too pale. i can brush them over with the same color mix again since foreground elements are usually done when the paper dries completely. <BR/><BR/>[QUOTING ALLISON: Ooh, yeah I see what you mean about that yellow...]<BR/><BR/>This is what I'm saying. ;)Salubrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14947226213955912383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16950751.post-1158757161676121992006-09-20T20:59:00.000+08:002006-09-20T20:59:00.000+08:00I think this is neat. But the trees are too pale ...I think this is neat. But the trees are too pale - they should be a more stark silhouette against the dreamy sky. That would make both elements stand out more. Can you cheat and go over the trees with black acrylic, or something that will make them really dark?<BR/><BR/>Ooh, yeah I see what you mean about that yellow...Allison M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08362700513221195102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16950751.post-1158539887411984612006-09-18T08:38:00.000+08:002006-09-18T08:38:00.000+08:00thanks. it's just that i think the yellow is over...thanks. it's just that i think the yellow is overly saturated and the clouds look a little too dabbed out. <BR/><BR/>i am going to rework this for sure. just not today... :DSalubrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14947226213955912383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16950751.post-1158535301741462312006-09-18T07:21:00.000+08:002006-09-18T07:21:00.000+08:00hey, it's a good work you have there with water co...hey, it's a good work you have there with water colors...i'm not a painter but i think the yellow color gave your work more life... it's like the sun streaking behind the shadows... =)aperirehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05108822493358652306noreply@blogger.com